Editing

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I've got about 180 pages written and I'm definitely past the half way mark for my writing project. My wonderful wife has graciously offered to read and edit what I am writing. It is SORELY needed. There is a gentleman I know, a very experienced 4th edition DM who offered to read what I was writing. That was over a year ago, and he had no idea it would be this large, but when I hit 2/3 I may ask if he'll look it over.

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  1. AmraphaelJuly 28, 2010 at 5:02 AM

    Can you give us a teaser or short summary?

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  2. Ernie NoaJuly 29, 2010 at 3:56 PM

    I've got to check with my editor first.

    In all seriousness, I'm writing Hythum for Paper and Pencil. Yes, it's my third time around with this story. I wrote it for NWN1, and got half way through a NWN2 conversion. Having it half done, really didn't sit well with me, so hopefully the PnP version will satify me.

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